Is this a decent beginning to a sonnet?

You are on the right track, just remember what road you want to portray in your poem, in other words use a point to begin and grow off of that one point instead of throwing lots of points you cant resolve, and it will be easier! That was very- very- very impressive, and your only 14, wow! I applaud you for asking others opinions. Also remember practice makes perfect! Keep up the good work!!!